I want her to see

She loves the way I dig in deep
In the sheets the blood will seep
Never will she cry or scream
only moans corrupt this dream
Every whip I snap against her
breaks her skin
"More" she'll whisper

She loves it when she's tied and bound
I'll watch and wait for her breakdown
"Please, Oh please" She'll beg to me
"hurt me good, I want to bleed"

And when she reaches that perfect climax
She shakes, shivers, and goes lax. 
Now in my arms, I access her grace.
And I know in my heart
I'll never see a more beautiful face.

I kiss her softly,
And look over her body
Cuts on her wrists and down on each leg
his heart twists and his worries plague

He wants her to know
He wants her to see
Just how beautiful she can be

Author's Note

Idk I was listening to Blue October and this happened :I

Reviews

[Jack Wolfe]

These kind of poems seem to be trending, this is the fourth erotic pain/pleasure poem I've seen today.

'Every whip I slam against her' (A whip can't slam, but it can crack, perhaps replace.)

I'd watch the double use of 'down' in consecutive lines or same stanza.

(h)e wants her to know (H)

Overall it was a good read, had a fluent rhythm to it, and I found it interesting that you switched tenses in the center, I assume intentional. Dark and seductive. Well Done.

[GhoulOfGore]

Thank you for your review! I don't know how I missed the fact that a whip can't slam. O_o Will be fixed when I get the chance. And again thank you, reviews mean a lot to me :D