All that Glitters is LoVe

This is an eternal love story that we may have felt but have never realized in those lifeless entities!!!

 

The whole day you stay with me. Your first touch and all pores of my body open up their eyes with vermilion smile on their faces. My soul looks radiant. It is your light that gets reflected throughout my body. It's your sheen that embrace me lovingly and I start shimmering. you are a passionate lover that has made me cling on to your love. But the more I like You because you are sublime and  you understands that you have to perform your duty honestly-bestow your light and serve the earth. I appriciate but I'm jealous. Sometimes I entice the cloud to hide you from rest of the world so that you'll be mine. They environ you and I make you enthralled by my bold beauty. How I can forget the way we make love and giggle behind the black cloud, the way your desperate lips touch mine, the way we loose our senses, the way we become a part of that eternal equity.

 

Oh my Lord, the king of light, the Sun I can't tell you how much I love you.

 

Every time you looks into my eyes the spark in them metamorphoses and rolls down as a few drops of pearls.

 

But this could never last long. Destiny could never be kind to us. It takes you away from me. I can't imagine myself without you. For whome I will look preety. I make myself free of all sort of embellishment. When you move away you take all my pristine colors and leave me dark and cold. The twilight, a flash in the pan, can never bring life to this body without a soul which is you..only you.

 

I start becoming feeble and at once ...

 

What kind of feeling is this..as if you again stepped into my life..as if you were always here..as if my fear of loosing you was just a mirage. A silver shine scintilated my face.

 

"Who are you?" I asked.

 

"The Moon, called I am" he replied.

 

I can't permit anyone other than my master to...he could read my mind and whispered hastily"It is a gift from your master. I am just a bondslave who has been sent to serve you. He loves you more than anything. He wants you to smile and adore yourself even when he is not with you. All of us have to dance the destiny wants us to. It is me who, wearing a tiny part of your master's flame, is here to obey him-to return you your incredible beauty."

 

That moment of honour made me feel blessed with true love of my master and his solicitude brought heaven under my feet. Gradually my entire body started looking even prettier with all those twinkling stars that, I know, he had presented me each of which was singing the words of his love.

 

Lovers always appreciate me more with the moon and those million stars. But what I want is to wait for you till the next morning will come and I will be again with you as your charming blue Sky.

Author's Note

while writting the story I was the sky who was expressing her feeling and the best ever gift she got from her true lover,the Sun. I have tried to describe the incidence of one night when sun gifted her the best part of her life. So I hope you can understand the tense and time. I also got confused at a certain point of time and I hope I could have made proper justice to my work. Your suggestion will be highly appriciated.

Reviews

[Rima]

Great job! I like the description!
I didn't many are almost any errors, except for one sentence.
"The moon, called I am," he said.
My only suggestion would to be rewrite sentence
Anyway great job, keep writing!!