It's A Good Day To Have Some Fun

I step outside into the sun

The morning seems to have just begun

It's a good day to have some fun

So I put on some shoes and socks

I went outside and turned all the locks

I walked calmly for a few blocks

When I started to go for a run

I started to realize the beat

Of the pitter patter of my feet

Every time they hit the concrete

I looked at the time and it was one

By then I had started to sweat

My clothing and face were soaking wet

I had gone for miles I bet

When I saw a few girls and a nun

I started to talk with these girls

All of their heads were covered with curls

One of them said her name is Pearl

A handsome man came; I was outdone

It was time for me to depart

I felt hungry with pain in my heart

So I walked right up to a cart

And I ordered a hotdog and bun

After I ate, I called a car

And he took me to the nearest bar

I arrived and heard a guitar

I walked in and ordered a cold one

There I met a girl who was Dutch

And while we talked, we drank way too much

Going on about such and such

And after a while, the room spun

Well I was absolutely screwed

And then the bartender called me rude

So then we got into a feud

And I am pretty sure that I won

After that mess, we went outside

And we decided to call a ride

We went to the place I reside

Driver asked for a tip, but got none

We got in and took off our shoes

And we also drank a bit more booze

Then suddenly, I blew a fuse

When she mentioned that she had a son

I was loud; she told me to stop

But that did it and I blew my top

She grabbed a phone and called a cop

And I went over and grabbed my gun

She had escaped from my rigor

And then I had lost all my vigor

Gun to my chest, pulled the trigger

And then my body felt a great stun

So that day I hadn't survived

It was some time before they arrived

And then I couldn't be revived

So then my entire life was done

Reviews

[Raivenne]

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