" Amnesia"

" Amnesia"

A Poem by Purplee_weirdo
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This is entittled for guys who Cheat, and don't appreciate what they have! and act as if they didn't even do anything and eventually forget,while the girls they cheated on are grieving :(

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“Amnesia”
Nicki Tam
There came a time that it seemed everything vanished.
Like it all flew away as if I was punished.
Yet I’m still wondering what I did wrong.
I knew it won’t last that long.


All I wanted is for you to understand.
How it struck me when you asked for my hand.
Now suddenly you forgot everything.
I actually thought you would be my king.


That’s it I’ve have enough.
I can’t take it, this is just too rough.
I know inside you, you still remember me.
Please I just want to be in glee.


I have no choice but to accept the fact.
That all of it was just an act.
But I would like to thank you.
For the moments you were being true.

© 2015 Purplee_weirdo


Author's Note

Purplee_weirdo
Hello :3 second poem written, hope you like it. LOL. im a beginner so yeah :/ sorry hahaha xD Hope you like it :)

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For a little girl like you, well done!
I love the way you wrote this piece..
So powerful..

But I guess for a young lady like you, focus first on your studies. I'm not saying that you do not have the right to fall in love because we all have that right. Its cool to have an inspiration.. And good job because you composed an amazing poem after that incident. But for now, prioritize your studies.

Keep writing young lady..
GREAT JOB.
^_______^

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 7, 2015
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Purplee_weirdo
Purplee_weirdo

Manila, NCR, Philippines



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Im 14 years old. Im an 8th grader... and i decided to write poems myself. HOPE you guys like it :) btw My name is Nicki more..

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