a life will stop

i made this for a friend

a life will stop

the sun will go down

smiles will fade

a night of sleepless slumber

in a small dark town

the stars disapper

as the clouds come in

the havens began to cry

the wind blows the sorrows away

leaves leave the trees just like you left us

days with out you aren't as fun

but the smiles come back cause life goes on

your smile and your face are branded into our brains

for ever we will remember you but for those who don't never diserved you

Author's Note

it aint the best but its what i felt

Reviews

[Chaos X 3]

I feel your loss sistah!

[Babbette Francis]

Sorry for your loss.
Your poem says plenty about how you feel and say it beautifully. Again, sorry for your loss.