Unloved

It kind of represents how I feel most of the time. :

My heart.

It hurts.

It feels like a hole.

How do you fill a hole in the heart she asked.

A hole in the heart is filled with love she was told.

How can I get this love you speak of she asked.

There is no love in this world for you she was told

The hole gets even bigger.

My heart.

It hurts.

Author's Note

I know the 'she asked.' and 'she was told.' makes it kind of funny but I didn't know what else to do!! Help! Any suggestions???

Reviews

[Colleen a Bean]

It shows that something was going wrong in your love life and makes perfect sence to me and the she asked she was told parts makes it even more of um something u just melt into u don't want to stop it's like u were having an argument with your self like your heart, your brain and your soul were all trying to tell u something. Does that make any sence at all lol sorry not the best at reviews but i'm trying for u hun lol :)

[karen samarin]

i liked it alot..... when your heart is hurt you feel empty but with the love of others and god it fills it

[Katie L]

i like it the way it is it makes it more interesting