Not Anymore

If you let me love you... I will.

If you let me hug you... I will.

If you let me hold your hand... I will.

If you let me stare into your eyes... I will,

If you let me stay by your side forever... I will.

 

But you won't let me love you,

You won't let me hug you,

You won't let me hold your hand,

You won't let me stare into your eyes,

And you won't let me stay by your side forever.

 

At least not anymore.

Author's Note

Idk. I've been experimenting different ways of writing poetry and this is not one of my better ones. :) I'd still like some reviews on it though. Tell me what I could do to make it better and what-not.

Reviews

[Colleen a Bean]

I like it lol don't worry about it being perfect poetry doesn't have to be perfect.

[Fallen Angel]

Are you going through all of my poetry and commenting on all of it??

[Colleen a Bean]

lol maybe but only cause I haven't read like any of it before haha

[Fallen Angel]

Read any of what..???

[Colleen a Bean]

lol any of your poetry haha

[Fallen Angel]

lolz Well you've read like ALL of them about FOUR times now!! haha :D

[Colleen a Bean]

lol no haha