Questions

Questions

A Poem by Fallen Angel

If I stare into your eyes,

will you stare right back,

or will you look away?

 

If I try to hold your hand,

will you hold mine proudly,

or will you take yours from me?

 

If I hug you,

will you hug me tighter,

or will you pull away?

 

If I say, 'I Love You',

will you stare into my eyes and say it back,

or will you just walk away?

 

These are the questions I need answered.

Will you please give them to  me?

© 2009 Fallen Angel


Author's Note

Fallen Angel
I didn't know how to end it but I needed to find an ending and this is what I came up with. Kinda sucks. Any suggestions?

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no It is good lol if I ended it I would maybe say something around the lines of " these are the questions I have for you darling" but that's just me what u have is really good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Colleen a Bean

12 Years Ago

lol awh ok I guess it's kinda mine to haha
Fallen Angel

12 Years Ago

lolz You have a lot of wierd things. :P
Colleen a Bean

12 Years Ago

yes I do haha

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Fallen Angel
Fallen Angel

Floating on a cloud., MN



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