Please ignore any grammar issues and let me know what you think - being critical is fine with me. (:
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Hello there. I thought that since you reviewed my story (which I really appreciate) I'd come check out your stuff. This story's really interesting and a great idea. All I can say is that it could use more description of the characters and surroundings.
Also, I thought it was really cool that you used the word 'whilst' in your prologue. No one ever uses that word anymore, so kudos!
This was incredible and amazing. I am dumb founded by the choice of your words. You are a very creative writer and I hope to see more from you.
Keep it up and I hope to see more chapters because I'd like it to keep going! : )
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