Dance Me To The Moon

Writen for a contest.

 

Let me make tea

And dream

All the way

To the moon.

 

And simply sleep

Amidst the craters

Like a field on

A far off island.

 

I will dance

Upon the air’s

Surface like small

Dandelion fluff.

 

For the first time

I jump

Without looking down

Without caring where I land.

 

 

Author's Note

Alberts Poetry Cafe ~ Tovlis Ten Words ~ "A Double 10/60"

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congrats on winning Tovli's TEN contest!

[Tony Hwilka]

Congratulations winning first place, I like the way you arrange the words, great poem.

Tony Hwilka

[Tovli]

really nice! tovli

[Sel Whiteley]

This is such a powerful poem with such beautiful descriptions and metaphors.

I will dance
Upon the air's
Surface like small
Dandelion fluff.

Brilliant.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your winning poem! So well penned.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

A good treatment of the phrase contest of Tovli.

[Jimmy Greenie]

Nice. Loved it. Nice metaphors too. Strange ending though.
This was based on something else? Sorry, I haven't seen this contest.
Doesn't make it any worse though. Well done!

[Helena]

What a lovely write. A wonderful take on Tovli's 10/60!
You penned this so well and the word were melded so
artfully in there.

" I will dance
Upon the air's
Surface like small
Dandelion fluff."

Loved this stanza the most!

Helena

[Kelley]

I see what you mean. And this was a simple poem that just was how you felt in that part of the day.
Well remember what I told you. Great write anyway.

Kelley

[Crazy Cat Man]

i would love to dance with you to the moon :) great piece