Musings and Memories

Formerly ?????????

 

 

 

Images dance

Just beyond my mind’s eye

A voice inside

Dying to cry.

 

Where are the answers

To life’s unasked questions?

Where are the clues

To the secrets of death’s illusions?

 

Visions swirl

In the muddied waters

Kodak memories

Played backwards.

 

Someplace in time

Behind the masks

Someplace in life

Where the fear basks.

 

Robbing the poor

To feed the blind

Searching desperately

For nothing to find.

Author's Note

Does the new title work for the piece?

Reviews

[Alya Usman]

Nice. Really nice! Love it!

Oh and in the second stanza, add (?) to the second and last lines

[DavidRyan]

This is really good. I like it a lot. The message, the flow, the strength of your writing : it's all there. Maybe title it "Traveling Through Fear" ?

[Kelley]

I loved all kinds of lines you used in this Beth like.......
"Dying to cry."
and
"Kodak memories
Played backwards."
and
"Robbing the poor
To feed the blind"
over I just love it all!!!

and I have a great title for it
how about ...The Devil May Cry

hummmmmm maybe not....smiles

thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Crazy Cat Man]

Oh its cool to write things and just let it flow......but i wouldn't mention that you have no idea what you are writing about......let us decide..... you dont have to say anything :)