Drowned In Tears

My heart weighs heavy on my soul,
For both are drowned in tears
The endless struggle in myself,
Made worse throughout these years

I walk along this path to Hell,
While Deaths upon His throne
Beneath a sky as black as night,
This stranger goes alone

I hear the wails of those who've lost,
And again....will never be
As waves of crimson pound the shore,
Then crash back to the sea

Frozen in the place I stand,
My voice a silent scream
I fear this time I may not wake,
To end this tortured dream

As nightmares rage all hope is lost,
My mind can't take the pain
So I battle with these Evil thoughts,
But never speak their name

For just to voice such Evil words,
Could never be survived
And would bring the gates of Hell itself,
Upon a persons life

Though I run and run to escape the hold,
Of Death and all my fears
My heart weighs heavy on my soul,
For both have drowned in tears

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You place these dark feelings in a skipping, fluid well metred piece of poetry. Love the rhyming too so easy and non clunky!

[Pure Evil]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment

[Chris Shaw]

Certainly does weigh heavy on the emotions, but is a good piece of poetry. Rhymes well and flows like a stream.

All good wishes

Chris

[Pure Evil]

Thank you Christine, for taking the time to comment. It is much appreciate

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.

[Grace]

A very dark write and left me feeling heavy. Though I agree, the rhyming is good.

[Pure Evil]

Thank you Grace for commenting, it as really appreciated

[John the Baptist]

Very well rhymed, but damned somber. Sounds like a condemned man contemplating his life on the night before his execution.

[Pure Evil]

Lol, most of mine are like this. Thanks for your comment, it is very much appreciated