I Let you free

I wrote each stanza of this poem in different course of time, each stanza represents different phase of my experience.

And if i set you free today,
Would you fly away,or
Would you sit back in the comforts,or
Just today would you dare to seek the unknown;

And if i set you free
Would you validate your thoughts,
Would you share the quirkiness of yours,
Would you be happy.

And if i set you free
Would you stop running for accomplishments
Would you run away from what's expected of you
Would you in this time stop seeking 'yes' from others;

And if i set you free
Would you cherish the now
Would you let go of the past
Would you just have hope for tomorrow.

Author's Note

What would you do if you set yourself free of all boundaries or expectations that is on you?

Reviews

[Gaurav]

Its a wonderful poem. even if i assume that its for the self, these are very pertinent questions..sometimes we shout for freedom, but if that is achieved, would it for good?
Really like your thoughts..i have to ask these questions to myself, aloud

[Olivia]

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

[Amanda Trerotola]

Beautifully written! I love the repetition.

[Olivia]

Thank you!

[Onlyme]

Lovely read, deep, insightful and interesting. Gives me a better perspective of the type of person you are. Thoughtful, deep and motivated. Just a few.

[Olivia]

Thank you Dee, that's so nice of you.

[Onlyme]

Not nice sweetheart, honest. Your a good person. Remember that. :)

[Olivia]

I will. And so are you i believe. Lot of positive vibes coming from you.
Much appreciated.

[Onlyme]

Thanks Olivia.