How I Feel

How I Feel

A Poem by Destiny Doré
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Just feeling down and this came to me...

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I feel like a barren desert 
no friends and no life 
I feel like a deep sea
nothing on the surface 
but so much to give
I feel like a forest 
every one sees the edges 
but no one sees inside 
I feel like nobody cares 
and that nobody will

I feel like a barren desert 
no friends and no life 
I feel like a deep sea 
people passing by 
but nobody stays 
I feel like a forest 
chopped down and ruined 
but with the possibility of life
I feel like nobody cares 
and that somebody should 

© 2014 Destiny Doré


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I can totally relate to this from time to time, we all have our moments of getting down and feeling no one cares, but don't give up. Sometimes people do care but they don't know how to express it, and sometimes we need to take notice of others that may feel the same way, this may help us feel better. This actually made me feel a little bit better now because I was feeling blue and it's nice to know I'm not the only one dealing with these feelings lol

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Destiny Doré
Destiny Doré

VA



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Hey, A little bit about me is, I have been writing for most my life but really got into it when I took creative writing in High School. I mostly write poetry because I love the descriptive language.. more..

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