Stump

Not how I feel, but I like the idea anyway!

Stump

a stump

dry

alone

 

my soul

longing

scared

 

grey

ancient

burnt

 

desolate

abandoned

afraid

 

wasted

barren, bare

long ago charred

and dead

 

the heart

is eaten

the outside

marred

 

only the bones

sucked dry

 

and the sun

still ruthless

devours

Author's Note

Is it better or worse without puctuation (capitalisation, etc.)?

Reviews

[Puzzle-bot]

Good, but I bit hard to read. I like the non-punctuated part of it, but I think that capitalizing the first line of every verse or so would make it easier to read.