Can't Be Fixed

Cold prickles of fear,

Skin burning in shame,

I can't have you near,

I can't take the blame.

You said you didn't want me,

You said I hardly mattered,

That was the key

To having my heart shattered.

 

Now you have moved on,

Now you have forgotten,

I feel so withdrawn,

All I can feel is rotten.

I hope someday you read this,

I hope someday you hurt,

Knowing something is amiss

That can't just be fixed.

Author's Note

Inspired by many things, from New Moon to John Mayer's "Heartbreak Warfare". A lighter tone as well. I hope you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading, please leave a review!

Reviews

[Daniel Gardner]

This is really good. It sounds like a rush of feelings, not sitting and wallowing in sorrow but being sad, yet sadly accepting it. Nice work. though.

[Ashley June Canfield]

I like the way this flows, and I like the first few lines a lot.
:]

[Daydreamer54]

Nice rhyming scheme hjere! it flowed nicely! There is such hurt emotions here! keep up the good work! :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a good poem. I think over time they will realize what they have done...and they will start to feel horrible about what they have done. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Matt]

i like it! great job. : D

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wow..this reads so well...
a somber but wonderful piece...
love this...superb poetry!!!

J:)

[Jennifer Pennington]

Well done hun!

[Haifa]

Dark poem but you did a great job on it. Well done :)

[Just Charles]

I feel as though this piece is missing one more stanza, in the middle. I don't know why. Overall, the beginning immediately caught my attention. Good poem!


- Charles

[Khaotic Katastrophe]

i love this sooo much. the words amazing together