Betrayal

A familiar feeling creeps into your heart,
Hot flushes of pain take over all senses.
Every heart beat seems like effort
And each breath barely rattles out.
Understanding is not an option,
Talking? Unbearable.
The last thing you want to do is see their wretched face again.
So much hurt that you're numb,
So much anger that you shake,
But the worst part of all?
They don't care.
You are replaceable,
Disposable,
And worthless.

 

So keep on smiling on the outside while you die within,
And never let them know that they hurt you.
People will do this over and over again,
We just have to find the ones worth suffering for.

Author's Note

A little different for me.
Thanks for reading, please leave a review!

Reviews

[BecauseYouLoveMe]

I'm impressed. You captured the feeling of betrayal so perfectly, it's exactly what I've been feeling as of late. There's one or two grammatical errors, nothing too bad and it's very interesting. Although the poem has a very dark setting, the theme is actually quite positive, which can be a hard thing to do with writing. Good job and keep up the good work.

[Zakkarias Astrophel]

a powerful poem.... Thank you

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a great poem and I believe that you captured the feeling of betrayal perfectly too. I know what that feels like. I must say that it's not fun. Yeah and it is in a dark setting, but I know what you mean. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Frantzuu]

This is a very impressive piece of writing, the emotions came out well, great job!!

[Ruth]

Different but good lol
Hurt and angst portrayed well here love!
Excellent work
xx