The Search

Just trying to find my place.

Horrific sunlight staining my sight,

All I can see is happiness.

How can these traitors treat my plight

As if it is something that can be ignored?

 

Turning and looking, looking and turning,

I desperately search for empathy.

Nowhere to be seen, nowhere to be found,

I am tired of such yearning.

 

Finally I retreat down the stairs,

And smell the stench of suffering.

For once I know I am in the right place;

I see the portal to Hell unlock.

Author's Note

Been gone for a while, hopefully this lives up to my previous poetry and your expectations!
Thanks for reading, please leave a review!

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great write. I don't believe in Hell though. I do like this poem though. And it does meet my expectations because it was well written. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Dev]

Vivid imagery make this a very fine read. Good right.

[Ruth]

Certainly does! lol
An awesome poem love that leaves the reader bewitched by the strength of raw emotion within it:)
Great write
xx