Ready to Pounce

Ready to Pounce is sexy, intimate poem.

 

Ready to Pounce

 

 

Lathering up for our next encounter.

 

Atta Girl!

 

I only wish this encounter

is as sweaty as the last.

 

Hopefully, we can have the

privilege of running marathons

through the night.

 

Possibly in pursuit of a newfound pleasure,

an erotic feeling yet to be discovered.

 

Sex with you is something I dream about,

but somehow, it pales in comparison

to the reality of our sex.

 

Each encounters, I remember them

as vividly as the previous.

 

I embed them in my memory.

 

I embody your sexual fantasy

and you embody the innocent princess

I’d love to deflower.

Reviews

[S. Janszen]

This seems consistent with an average, socially acceptable vocabulary. It also contains no real depth. The "Atta Girl" is almost demeaning or belittling. The deflowering comment seems inappropriate when considering the previous statements of "encounters." There is also a typographical error.

[Jessi Webb =)]

It is ok !

[X_Emo_Princess_X]

You really are an amazing poet! I love this!

[Akina]

great written :)
it's passionate and the poem really catched my attension.
good job.

Akina

[Inner Rain]

I dont think im old enough to be reading these sort of things yet... But i got your read request so i took a look anyway... :P

Uh... its nice... i can send a shiver down someones spine... its very wild... its good, it can really catch the readers attention...

Good write!!! :P

[deeps]

Wow! This is unqiuely written. I like this, passionate and steamy

[IPMONER]

i love the fact that you made the poem direct and very vivid, it make readers go out into variations of perceptions like on how to interpret the poem.

but honestly i thought the poem is about same sex carnal lust, LOL