Mirage in the Distance

A mirage in the distance

The absolute splitting image of my biggest mistake.

Each freckle, more revolting than the previous.

 

I suffocate.

At such a resemblance,

I remain at a blockade.

 

Is it really her?

My biggest mistake?

The root of my regret?

 

Has she wandered her way back into my life again,

Exactly four years after the great spring cleaning.

 

Reviews

[Elvina CZq]

Such a simple writing to give out a picture of a memory. Funny that my mind now is having the same thought as your poem. I like the title, by the way. Good work. Will read your other writing soon :)

[cest la vie]

The absolute splitting image of my biggest mistake.
Each freckle, more revolting than the previous"

Talk about a I hope/I hope not mentality. We have all felt this same exact way. I love the boldness of these lines, not melancholy, just flat out questioning. your writes are always A-one stellar..Great piece!!

Lynne

[Christen Rose]

"The Great Spring Cleaning" was my favorite.

hahaha. this was great.

youre exquisite. keep it up.

[deeps]

I like this one
I can feel it
well said