Zombie

Zombie

A Poem by Patrick O'Neil

Endless drifting, day and night. 
Slowly dragging the lifeless body. 
I speak in grunts and groans. 
Sometimes i scream in anger 
or desperation, its all the same. 

What drives me is hunger. 
To taste the living.. to be alive. 
It controls me. Chasing everything 
that has a pulse a heartbeat. 
I need to feel the rush of blood 
it warms this rotten corpse. 

I can't snatch up or run down 
the opportunity, that passed me by. 
I lift my head and turn towards it 
just clawing at it, as it runs and hides. 

Sometimes i stumble upon a dark corner 
where i find a heartbeat with no escape. 
I reach to touch it. Perhaps we can share 
the warmth of your body. Perhaps.. 
it will wake me from my grave. 

Screams of horror, 
call only my anger, envy and hate. 
I become, the monster the undead, 
attacking, blind and reckless 
destroying, consuming life. 
Till there is silence and hunger, 
for the new, the living for life. 
The Zombie always searching.

© 2013 Patrick O'Neil


Author's Note

Patrick O'Neil
The endless chasing after things that make us feel alive.

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What drives me is hunger.

To taste the living.. to be alive.

It controls me. Chasing everything

that has a pulse a heartbeat.

I need to feel the rush of blood

it warms this rotten corpse.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really loved this. If you think about it there are plenty that walk around in a zombie state and are numb to some emotions and life, when really all they want is to be able to feel and live again.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and ,yes very well put. I fully agree.
You did very well writing from the eyes of a zombie..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and a positive comment.
your note WAS my take AS I read the lines aloud... this is a relevant write for any period.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading.
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Dye
I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked on this one, not being a 'zombie' fan, but I am so happy that I read it. I love the metaphor!!! I think this can relate to most people, that want to feel alive. Always searching, sometimes feeling lifeless, a state of frustration. A great read that I truly enjoyed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for a positive review.
Dye

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
Wow . This write can go deeper than the surface where it touches on all our bloody chases in life and how some of it make us alive and some make us feel dead. We are always in that constant search mode...bravo...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I was hesitant on the subject and was afraid to overstate it,but still wanted to .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Patrick O'Neil
Patrick O'Neil

Gauteng, South Africa



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I am just an average man, with a normal live, and then suddenly i started writing poetry. Go figure??? I also post original rock style music on Sound Cloud, check it out if you are in to that sort .. more..

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