Manage The Risk

Manage The Risk

A Poem by Patrick O'Neil

Afraid to run and afraid to walk.

Afraid to stare, directly at the sun.

Manage the risk, manage it well.

Keep hidden so no one can tell.

 

Risk exists everywhere, in everything.

Danger and warning, constantly fleeing.

Don’t touch and don’t dare to feel.

Never let your heart be revealed.

 

No one can see, no one understands.

Manage myself, strategic avoidance plan.

Control and limit, contact and society.

Do it well, and earn a master degree.

 

Manage the risk, to live and to love.

Manage the time, before it runs out.

Manage to be a silent spectator, watcher.

See live from afar, bright like a flickering star.

Manage pain and manage regret.

Manage the risk, that’s all you get.

© 2013 Patrick O'Neil


Author's Note

Patrick O'Neil
Live is all about taking chances taking risk. If nothing is ventured nothing is gained.

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Once again, your Author's note is exactly what I was going to say in my review. Life is about taking the risks, so take them! nothing ventured nothing gained is exactly right.

well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you again, really appreciated.
A very well penned write, with a powerful message. So oftentimes we go through life with walls up, and really do not live our lives the way it was intended. You said it best, "nothing ventured nothing gained."
The line that really stood out to me was, "see life from afar, bright like a flickering star." Job well done. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for a great review.
This is a great write. You get a great message across!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you, so glad that the message came through.
I really like this and I would love your permission to re-blog it I will send you a message to the link I am going to post it at. I know someone very dear to me that dos these things and it breaks my heart. I am hoping that when reading this they will see just how lonely and silly it is to never let people in. I am not really one to talk since most of my interactions are online but this person I speak of knows they are loved cared for and still they want to just keep walls up. Anyways, thank you so much you have used just the right sets of words. Loving this piece! Wonderful, brilliant and insightful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much,you really do me a great honor. Really happy that the meaning came true, i tried n.. read more
A great poem with a lot of poignant wisdom in its words...Well done...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)

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Patrick O'Neil
Patrick O'Neil

Gauteng, South Africa



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I am just an average man, with a normal live, and then suddenly i started writing poetry. Go figure??? I also post original rock style music on Sound Cloud, check it out if you are in to that sort .. more..

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