Lovers Kiss

Lovers Kiss

A Poem by Patrick O'Neil

You look at me, in that special way. Without words, My body knows, what you say. My heart beat, faster, faster. You softly bite, the corner of your lip. Pulse now racing, all senses fully awake. I reach for you. Gently, touching your face. Tilting your head, just slightly. Eyes closed, my fingers run, through your hair. I pull you closer. Just inches, from your lips. Soft, warm, moist, wanting lips. It takes all my strength, to pause there.... Eyes open, with anticipation. We see each others, reflections. Laws of nature, suspended, in that instant. We fall into, passionate embrace. I am yours, you are mine. We are one, with a kiss.

© 2013 Patrick O'Neil


Author's Note

Patrick O'Neil
That special moment between lovers.

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Wow. I could imagine every euphoric moment as you described it so beautifully.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading, happy to hear you like it.
D: jelliness! I felt this poem. It made me cry though but that's good because poems are supposed to affect your emotions. ^.^ lovely poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Wow, really?,i never expected that it would have such an impact on anyone. Thank you so very much fo.. read more
C.M. Dakota

11 Years Ago

No problem. I enjoy reading lovely poems ^.^

~ Haze
Wow. This is a very romantic poem full of beauty and passion...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
I love this! It sent tingles down my spine! It's vivid and well done. :) I love the imagery of this specifically when you say when you say "Just inches, from your lips. Soft, warm, moist, wanting lips."

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank You so much

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Added on May 15, 2013
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Patrick O'Neil
Patrick O'Neil

Gauteng, South Africa



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I am just an average man, with a normal live, and then suddenly i started writing poetry. Go figure??? I also post original rock style music on Sound Cloud, check it out if you are in to that sort .. more..

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