Regret

Regret

A Poem by Patrick O'Neil

I regret, that i saw you. I regret, we laughed and talked. I regret, i gave you flowers. I regret, the first kiss. I regret, that i asked you. I regret, you said yes. I regret, everything about you. Mostly i regret, the time, with you. For now, I miss you so. I regret, that i love you, more than my heart can hold. Now, you are gone, and i am still here. I so, so regret, i cannot, ever, hold you near.

© 2013 Patrick O'Neil


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Patrick O'Neil
Bittersweet pain and longing.

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Oh this makes me want to cry! So much emotion! Well done! Love the repetition!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Oh wow how lovely and relate-able this is true of many relationships if you dont deal with the sadness first and you immediately turn it to anger I see regret creeping in as the last emotion. I was talking with a friend today and he said when he gets sad he turns it into anger but I say let the sadness happen move through it experience it even. Well written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for a great review. And you are so right.

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Added on May 15, 2013
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Patrick O'Neil
Patrick O'Neil

Gauteng, South Africa



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I am just an average man, with a normal live, and then suddenly i started writing poetry. Go figure??? I also post original rock style music on Sound Cloud, check it out if you are in to that sort .. more..

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