Cyber love's true intent

Cyber love's true intent

A Poem by Patrick O'Neil

I can not, believe my luck! Thinking I would be, forever stuck. Yet here you are, my beautiful, avatar. How could it be a fake? my true love, @sweetheart 88 We danced, quick reply and slang from room to room, from 8 to late. We shared love's words, in cyberspace, made special, by networks grace. Soon, love's web was spun. How could this, ever go wrong? Let's cam , skype or kik? Silver words, to truth or dare. So please do show, that private post? Cyber love, intent exposed! All souls take care! Protect your heart, be aware! Love online has it's cost! Credit cards, not all that could be lost. A broken heart, love's final, greatest loss!!

© 2013 Patrick O'Neil


Author's Note

Patrick O'Neil
I started this with an ironic, comics twist in mind and ended up with this. That love online has risk and people forget that when the emotions run high.

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I think it we very good, just watch your spacing, though that's just nit picking. The rhyme was cute, and the message was something a lot of people can relate to. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patrick O'Neil

11 Years Ago

Thanks,still new to this, much appreciated.
Andie

11 Years Ago

Anytime. :)

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Added on May 15, 2013
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Patrick O'Neil
Patrick O'Neil

Gauteng, South Africa



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I am just an average man, with a normal live, and then suddenly i started writing poetry. Go figure??? I also post original rock style music on Sound Cloud, check it out if you are in to that sort .. more..

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