Cyber Dump

Met someone, online! We LOL, and had a good time. Words were spoken, Too little too few, No worry, soon we will redo. O life, online? Cruel unkind No reply, request denied! Cyber dumped, it seems No reason or goodbye. Its not polite, to be rude, mad or cry when you post a final goodbye. Wishing supposed friends, peace, and joy. Better luck next try. So what to do? Switch rooms....retry. True, but be warned! Should they that cyber dump Without regret, without reply, Trip, fall and die! It is expected from the few. The poor lonely, left in cyber loo. Just to smile and wave, Bye, Bye Good Riddance to you!

Author's Note

A look at how people treat others online without regards for their feelings.

Reviews

[Andie]

The majority of the people I talk to, I've never met. How sad. Aha.
Your poem was truthful, and depicts online chatting spot on. Good job.

[Patrick O'Neil]

Thank you.

[K.S.78]

How about how people treat people in LIFE in general! This was so well written and very enjoyable/relate-able. I liked the woe is me and then the screw you, it seemed very humanistic for being about cyber space which I liked! :) You are so very clever its awesome to read your stuff I am always surprised lol! Great write!

[Patrick O'Neil]

Thank you for a great review.

[Sami Khalil]

A very unique subject matter( Cyber love and dump ) and I like the title and the poem. All done well...Thank you for sharing.

[Patrick O'Neil]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Graveyardfuck]

I really like this!! It's actually quite charming but a little sad. The rhyming is perfect, and the theme is too. Very original piece. Love it! 100 :D

[Patrick O'Neil]

Thank you, very much appreciated.