Can You Hear Me?

Try not to care anymore,
care about anything.

I can't anymore, not with all this noise.
I try screaming out.
No one hears me,
No one should care anyway.

What's this horrible taste in my mouth?
Not a flavour.

More like a feeling,
Like I was meant for something.
But I just could'nt do it.

Think back.
Into the void,
What's the hardest thing you've ever had to do?

Not wanted,
Not chosen,
But, by what ever law you choose to discipline yourself by, Had to.
It's easy to remember, right?

I've made my way
Through my fair share of the mucky, hard times.
I've given up the things I cared about,
The people I cared about.

And, in all my short years,
I've given up everything that ever mattered to me.

And why?
For who?
Someone who's just going to leave me out in this desolate place?

Someone who'll leave me stranded,
Alone,
Within myself.

They never cared.
They never will.

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I've made my way
Through my fair share of the mucky, hard times.
I've given up the things I cared about,
The people I cared about.

Like these lines alot, very expressive and emotional write.
I like this, very well expressed.