As I Lay

Beautiful skies, about to break.
Awesome earth, about to quake.
Loving you was all I needed.
Laying on this earth defeated.

Author's Note

I meant Awesome in the old sense of the word, someting that inspires awe.

Reviews

[Corvus]

Very, very beautiful. It's short, yet packed with meaning of how one can get lost in emotion (in this poem, love) while the world may break around them. It's very awe inspiring.

[deeps]

WOW i like this write alot.
this is amazing

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. A lot of truth in the words. You said a lot in so few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Christy]

Someone told me once that poetry shouldn't be short. It's poems like this that make me remember why poems CAN be short. nice write!