Pale Rain

Sometimes I think about suicide
There's no silver lining in the empty sky
I drank too much and it did nothing
I think my vices are turning against me

I don't want to love anymore
I'm sick of the same old songs
Nothing idealized is ever worth it
I'm not perfect and Christ,
I feel it more so when I'm with her

Reviews

[JayceeC]

If you're waiting for perfection he'll will freeze first, and have you noticed that fairy tales end at the start of a love affair? After a while the flaws become apparent, it's just whether they make things unravel, or add character That is the deciding factor in the end.

[Luna Zerimar]

Suicide.

......Suicide.

[zephyr]

The answer isn't in the clouds. It is a lot nicer than you could ever realize, inside, just beyond the clutter of one's thoughts. You are one of my favourites on here.

[SOSAtoned]

I like what your saying, but i feel like there is more to that second verse

[Simon Welsh]

I think I ran out of things to say. Writing has been difficult recently.

[SOSAtoned]

I don't want to love anymore
I'm sick of the same old songs
Nothing idealized is ever worth it
I'm not perfect

you have plenty to say just have to expand it. those are all subjects of verses of pale rain.. imo

[Simon Welsh]

Sometimes I use titles that lack relation. I.e. a previous poem was titled Joan Crawford's Fist of Fury. I don't think anyone got the joke though.