Drown Sunshine

She eats the petals of flowers
even as they wilt and rot inside her
No scars of mine are symmetrical
because pain isn't an accessory

Threw a rope around the moon
thought of hanging myself there
Still, the dreams of stars explode 'round me
There's nothing like watching hopes die

A halo of chewed roses, a scratched arm
I'll tear at myself till I feel content
Rain drowns the last bit of sunshine
maybe now I wash these feelings away

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

I agree with the painting thing.

I'm sorry, but it's actually a bit comical. I can just picture you in my head just running around frantically, and throwing paint onto a canvas.

Like a mad man.

[Emily]

My new favorite of your!
Well done!
I love that first line!
Keep it up!

[Dark Poet]

Deep and beautiful. Like the previous comment, it's like a painting.

[Gabby Nieves]

Like a painting, love your stuff always