Then She Came

She may have several shades of lipstick
smeared across that mouth of hers
She doesn't want no dog howling all night
instead she'll face that beast up close

She gave me her heart
and I gave her a pearl necklace
I've come all undone
and so, she smiles
She smiles

She's got a pie cookin' in the kitchen
but she does all her work in the lounge
From six to nine, she's all mine
reaching round when I need her the most

She gave me her heart
and I gave her a pearl necklace
I've come all undone
and so, she smiles
She smiles

She's baking biscuits but they're getting soggy
even though it's getting hot in here
I don't get how someone with such little money
gets out of paying so many bills

Reviews

[Shadows Ember]

I really like this. great piece.

[Gabby Nieves]

It would be awesome if you made music too, do you make music? I read this as lyrics. Great job

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You are definitely a force to be reckoned with, Elliott...
Hold your pen up high... with pride!...
Excellent work, my friend!~xoxo~:)

[Matching Socks]

Oh aren't you just so clever. :)
Lovely.

[Patrick]

This is not just deep and compassionate but is well written and works for me on so many levels. Awesome write here my friend this really needs to be honoured.