Commelina communis

Lily of the valley strides so swiftly
An ink blot on a dense, pale landscape
Sweep me away in waves of slumber
as the blinking birds shed the clouds
I'm sure there's a perfect rainbow somewhere

Apples shine red in the vast playing fields
I don't belong to anyone which is a blessing
Rosewater falls upon this lush Heaven
revealing pathways only seen in dreams
Lift the weight upon my shoulders and I will rise

Speak softly and let the breeze carry your words
Poetry is the kindest words we share only for a few
Sure, I allowed the romance of spiritual revival seduce me
but it's the promise of happiness that allows me to find resolve

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

Always a pleasure Elliott.

"Speak softly and let the breeze carry your words
Poetry is the kindest words we share only for a few.."

That was my favorite part. It's amazing.

Because it's true.

You haven't posted in a while sir.

Come back. I'm sure people miss you 'round here. (Me.)

[L4rn13]

Soothing write and as usual written very well.

[Dark Poet]

I love the last part the most. Beautiful:)

[Emily]

I like how you have word it! Well done!