Electric Love

Just hitching a ride on the cosmic astral belt
so I can get away from the bad vibrations
There's more to life than death
so let the emotions fade when they can

Leave me be
I just want to skip stones across the sky
until the stars shine in technicolour

Being misunderstood is easy and I should know
I can't tune in and yet dropping out is easy
Electric love is what my heart craves
and thus, I am deprived what I most desire

Leave me be
I just want to skip stones across the sky
until you need the sunshine as I do

Just hitching a ride on a path of stardust
till I reach the gemstones of a perfect galaxy
And if you can shed the sadness within
I won't be alone when the midnight sun rises

Author's Note

Had severe writers block recently. This is the best I can do.

Reviews

[L4rn13]

Nice celestial piece and expresses a lot of feeling. I like it.

[Dreamer]

I absolutely love the title, this is a great piece!

[zephyr]

There was both a sense of whimsy and melancholy to this one that gave it a very full palette and the imagery was wonderful.

[Luna Zerimar]

You still can write well for writers block. I'm kind of jealous.

[Emily]

I like your wording!! Well done.

[Brook]

I think this is brilliant. Great job!