Never Be

I'm a broken little doll
Weaved with the tears and rain I feel
even when I am smiling
Time to cradle the misery within us
even negativity needs love sometimes

Cream white flowers wave in the breeze
above a journal of unread poetry
The most beautiful thing is that
they will never be appreciated

I'm a dewdrop on the coldest morn
The petal will always be adored
while I drop onto the ground
The only comfort I can take from this
is that at least I was beautiful for a while

Cream white flowers wave in the breeze
above a journal of unread poetry
The most beautiful thing is that
they will never be appreciated

Reviews

[L4rn13]

Well written and expresses a lot. Nice.

[Luna Zerimar]

...That explains a lot...at least it explains a lot to me...

[Tina Louise UK]

Kinda sad hun...but beautifully done :) x

[Brook]

"The petal will always be adored
while i drop onto the ground" I love that line, it's very powerful.
Wonderful job.

[A. Amos]

This is really well done:) great work