Rinky Dink Dink

Rinky dink dink, Rinky dink dink
I left my heart in the kitchen sink
Scrub away the dirt, scrub away the blight
soon I'll have a love that'll show me the light

Rinky dink dink, Rinky dink dink
Drop on by and I'll drop yer a wink
Your baby blue eyes brighten my day
soon I'll have a love that'll blow me away

Rinky dink dink, Rinky dink dink
Rinky dink dink, Rinky dink dink

Oooh, she's gotta leave very soon
but she'll be back this afternoon

Rinky dink dink, Rinky dink dink
I'll colour her in the most tickled pink
Some shortenin' bread will charm her right
and then maybe she'll wanna spend the night

Author's Note

Writer's block. So this is something intentionally juvenile with a Brian Wilson edge.

Reviews

[Laura Harrison]

What a cute little write :) you could never tell that you had writers block

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh darn, I'm a brown-eyed girl.... ;P
This is a lovely, fun piece to read... something quite different from you...

Dr. Seuss meets child's play on Viagra. lol (you know what I mean)...

Nicely done!~xoxo~:)

[zephyr]

I think it deceptively juvenile. There is a sense of a mad-hatter/alice to it. Quite creative, really.

[Brook]

I really like this, it's catchy. The repetition is wonderful.
Nicely done :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Well, at least you can still write. When I have writer's block, I can't even come up with a word. Good job.

[Tina Louise UK]

I enjoyed this one...lighthearted read :) x

[L4rn13]

Awesome tone and rhythm. I like it.

[A. Amos]

Interesting read, I think will make one killer tune