The Waves of the Ocean

I must be cold blooded to be so harsh
Truth is, I feel stranded out here in this city
No matter what beauty surrounds me
it's just a part of the dull isolation
Lord knows if I'll ever feel the true sense of liberty

In my dreams I'm always alone
I wish I could be on the waves of the ocean
living from one sun beam to the next
but I awake as I have fallen asleep
If I don't escape soon I'll fall apart

It hurts me deep within to know
that you can't be beside me
I'm afraid of my feelings but
that doesn't mean I don't care
Oh, this city will be the death of me

I want to run away to the golden light
Where the sparkles play upon the horizon
There's a new life out there somewhere...

Reviews

[L4rn13]

Thats it. Theres always hope, always a chance, this write is so unlike your norm but I like it. I like it a lot especially the way you have shown the ocean to be something positive and beautiful for she is normally depicted as constantly harsh yet misunderstood. Brilliant.

[J. Garcia]

Perfection at its finest. Flawless and hearfelt. You never fail me, Elliot dear.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You mix feelings with beauty quite well.

[Lexi Villanueva]

This sounds like a song I like it.100

[Pbrgrim]

The rythumn of the waves is always a great escape for the stresses of life. Hope you find inner happiness.

[Papercut-Sunrays]

You opened up pretty darkly, then finally ended with offering a sliver of gray beauty. Lovely :3 Beautiful poem