Manic Pixie Dream Girl

Crayon blue sky stretched out above me
from the palette of my dreams
I see an angel so far beyond this land
She makes me feel joyous and scared
even when I am beside her

When she smiles I see the sunlight in her eyes
She's so adorable, she waves away my blues
with the ease I could never attain

Crayon blue sky smeared above me
and upon the cream clouds lies a heart
I've always felt so hollow and now
since I first met you I know why
Maybe you complete me

Maybe she just understands

When she smiles I see the sunlight in her eyes
She's so adorable, she waves away my blues
with the ease I could never attain

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

This is a really cute and lovely write, romantic too; from beginning to end. Really nice. Straight from the beginning, the imagery just flows and the admiration... it all fits so nicely. Well done.

[u+2235 TaintedPeaceSign..]

gorgeous! well penned! what more to say? haha

100/100

[zephyr]

Another fabulous poem. You are so talented.

[J. Garcia]

Beautiful and sweet. So gentle. Never disappointing. (:

[Rose Diamond]

I really like how you related the setting to art/art tools! Very good job, I quite enjoyed it!

[L4rn13]

Very nice! Very different to your original writing style. Lovely as always.