Primal Lust

In the beginning I was the Original Sin
Primal Lust asserted me for wanton sex
Maybe I was just wanted a good time
I never wanted to change the world

I was the dark side of Jesus Christ
almost made him slip into Mary Magdalene
Stray from the Holy Path because
life isn't misery, it's what pleases us

I was the creator of all alcohols and opiates
just so mere humans could enjoy their boredom
Who needs virtue when you can have fun?
Don't deny your basic instincts

At the End of Days I'll be on top of beauty
riding her into the final solution of earth
Hedonism is what we exist for
May as well spread our legs for the afterlife

Reviews

[L4rn13]

Haha very interesting write that came across as both cynical and a little comical. However this ling protruded the most to me:

'At the End of Days I'll be on top of beauty
riding her into the final solution of earth
Hedonism is what we exist for
May as well spread our legs for the afterlife'

Interesting take to the afterlife as most would shy away from it thus the gesture of with legs making it seem too intimate and even intrusive.
Very strange write indeed but very drawing.

[Michele]

Maybe I was just wanted a good time
I never wanted to change the world

life isn't misery, it's what pleases us

best parts :P

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

An interesting write and ending stanza, as well as these lines:
"life isn't misery, it's what pleases us

I was the creator of all alcohols and opiates
just so mere humans could enjoy their boredom"

[Robbie~xoxo~]

OMG!... You don't hold back in this write... This is a clever calling of Temptation...

Your last stanza left me awestruck... (oh my innocent eyes!!) ;)
Very refreshing to read something off the beaten path...

Well done, Elliott!~xoxo~