I'm Right, We Were Wrong

I guess it's time we buried this wounded heart
The pain we felt is pitiful yet it made us feel
We're just too different for each other
and we'll never understand what it's like to be happy

What we had is now gone forever...

I'm not even sad, no my tears will never fall
I just wish I didn't delude myself to such a paradise
I think I knew from the start how little it mattered
when I would try to open my mind

You would only close your heart...

I guess it's time to brought an end to this tale
It's such a melancholy story for all those involved
and I'm quite tired with replaying my part
just to see where I went wrong

When we wasn't even right for each other...

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Dear Elliott,
What you have here is the beginnings of a "goodbye"...
Love is uncertain...especially when there is a tumultuous connection...
Can you truly surpass what hurts, and move on?... I believe you can.

Cut the strings and allow yourself to heal...

Well penned.~xoxo~

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Love and relationships can be difficult. Nice write, feelings, and thoughts.

[Michelle N. H.]

It's such an odd rollercoaster when feelings change. Once you've had someone touch your heart it's difficult to let them go, even while both might be aware that as a couple you just aren't right for each-other.. I'm very keen on that title.

[Laura Harrison]

It's sad when one person loves someone more than the other in a relationship. Nice poem.

[L4rn13]

Beautiful. Can really relate to this.