diamond flowers

shoegaze poetry

found the sunlight within your kiss
you collect the diamonds in the horizon
and present them as flowers
a sheen of gold crosses my vision
just a beautiful reminder of you

i only said what i felt was true
gather all the starlit roses
and we can finally relax
catch me if i fall and i
will never let you go

reach out and touch the haze
watch the sky ripple with curious fingertips
as you shake the snowflakes from your dark hair
remember me in your dreams
i'll be waiting for your embrace

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

catch me if i fall and i
will never let you go

"reach out and touch the haze
watch the sky ripple with curious fingertips
as you shake the snowflakes from your dark hair
remember me in your dreams
i'll be waiting for your embrace"

Elliott I have to say this is my favorite so far of all I have read from you. I love the flow and your use ov metaphor and adjectives.. Just beautiful. thank you for the rr.. My pleasure to read you. shallimarRose

[Fréyjä Helv..]

So romantic and very shoegaze...

[Red & Blue]

Wow.
My favourite stanza

reach out and touch the haze
watch the sky ripple with curious fingertips
as you shake the snowflakes from your dark hair
remember me in your dreams
i'll be waiting for your embrace

-bravo-

[Bleda]

Ah the imagery! :") Makes one feel all happy and fuzzy inside. :3

[bobc]

Very nice piece...thank you...bobc

[Pryde Foltz]

An alluring love poem. Big fan of the lines below.

'catch me if i fall and i
will never let you go'

'remember me in your dreams
i'll be waiting for your embrace'

[Kelly Scheppers]

"watch the sky ripple with curious fingertips"

You truly engage your reader, Elliott!

[SyberRose]

This is gorgeous ...and exquisite poem...Rose:)

[Brittney]

I really enjoy the vocabulary of your poetry. Very beautiful

[Clara]

'i only said what i felt was true
gather all the starlit roses
and we can finally relax
catch me if i fall and i
will never let you go'

I'll love this forever. ^__^