Waffles & Warm Milk

Waffles & Warm Milk

A Poem by Simon Welsh
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I'll kiss your hand as a gesture of kindness
because we both see the world as grey
I just want to sleep forever and
you need to escape

But there's no comfort like those sacred evenings
curled up in the soft embrace
of waffles and warm milk

I wish I could see the world through your eyes
that beautiful sun reflects gently
and I have a new perception of beauty

I'll kiss your hand as a gesture of kindness
because this rain blesses us with sadness
Maybe I could wander through your dreamland
as welcomed as any friend new or old

But there's no comfort like those sacred evenings
curled up in the soft embrace
of waffles and warm milk

© 2013 Simon Welsh


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Waffles and warm milk, oh, how delicious! A dream stated write. Pleasant read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting one, though the ending left me in a puzzle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I, like eglantine, don't see the poem as a whole, honestly, the first stanza only is what made it for me, the rest seemed a bit drug out. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, and I won't tell you to change your work. You're very talented, keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simon Welsh

11 Years Ago

I totally agree, don't worry xD
First off, great title. REally great title lol For me, the poem is in the first two stanzas... Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully penned Elliott .. Thank you for the rr.. Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A heartwarming piece... nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice, but of course, now I am hungry. A very dreamy piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem! Waffles and warm milk sound so comforting. I liked the symbolism and the tone of yearning in this poem. Nicely done Elliot!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'because we both see the world as grey
I just want to sleep forever and
you need to escape'

Those lines resonated with me. Lovely write.
I love waffles!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet and catchy. Very good love the title!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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