Waffles & Warm Milk

Enjoy.

I'll kiss your hand as a gesture of kindness
because we both see the world as grey
I just want to sleep forever and
you need to escape

But there's no comfort like those sacred evenings
curled up in the soft embrace
of waffles and warm milk

I wish I could see the world through your eyes
that beautiful sun reflects gently
and I have a new perception of beauty

I'll kiss your hand as a gesture of kindness
because this rain blesses us with sadness
Maybe I could wander through your dreamland
as welcomed as any friend new or old

But there's no comfort like those sacred evenings
curled up in the soft embrace
of waffles and warm milk

Reviews

[Red & Blue]

Waffles and warm milk, oh, how delicious! A dream stated write. Pleasant read.

[Rafia ~ Yellow Girl]

Interesting one, though the ending left me in a puzzle.

[Annabelle Lee]

I, like eglantine, don't see the poem as a whole, honestly, the first stanza only is what made it for me, the rest seemed a bit drug out. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, and I won't tell you to change your work. You're very talented, keep it up

[Simon Welsh]

I totally agree, don't worry xD

[eglantine]

First off, great title. REally great title lol For me, the poem is in the first two stanzas... Thanks for sharing!

[shallimarRose]

Beautifully penned Elliott .. Thank you for the rr.. Rose

[Fréyjä Helv..]

A heartwarming piece... nice work

[Pryde Foltz]

Very nice, but of course, now I am hungry. A very dreamy piece.

[Katiya K]

Lovely poem! Waffles and warm milk sound so comforting. I liked the symbolism and the tone of yearning in this poem. Nicely done Elliot!

[Clara]

'because we both see the world as grey
I just want to sleep forever and
you need to escape'

Those lines resonated with me. Lovely write.
I love waffles!

[Lexi Villanueva]

Sweet and catchy. Very good love the title!