Frustration

Frustration

A Poem by Simon Welsh
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I hate being lied to. And I hate it when it's 'justified' because of selfish actions.

"
My anger is only justified by my ire
regret of sympathy is only the beginning
Why can't you ever be honest?
I'm sick of wasting my time with this bullshit
Are you just deadweight that
threatens to drag me down?

Are you bitter, selfish or moronic?
Is the 'great evil' just vanity?
Find your true love has grown bored
rather than a beautiful rose
you're the weeds that strangle

I don't want frustration to dictate me
I just want you to take back everything
every lie, every tale, every fake fantasy
Why would I waste my life with you?
I can do so much better
if I set my sights much lower

Are you stupid, ignorant or arrogant?
Is your greatest ambition to f**k yourself?
Find your close friends have grown bored
There's more to life
than to carry your swollen ego

I want to bruise every clear sky
let the fire and blood rain
upon your pathetic little Heaven

© 2013 Simon Welsh


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"let the fire and blood rain
upon your pathetic little Heaven"

Woah.... This is really straight at the reader.. I take it you were perhaps caught up in one of these snares.. This is an extremely powerful piece... I hope she reads it...
I have known several that have been hurt by liars and fakes pretending to be someone they are not.. false pictures, phonies with an agenda the worst kind.... Your words are strong your message even stronger. " Is your greatest ambition to f**k yourself?" Great angry rant..

Thank you for the read request..
shallimarRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Damn. You just basically wrote everything i feel about half the people in this world! Great job INCREDIBLY powerful I swear I could feel the anger radiating off each word. If ya ever need to talk you know where to find me :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well someone just got burned ;) I could really feel your frustration and anger here.
Brilliant piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can do so much better
if I set my sights much lower

Brilliantly, witty line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You always nail it with the last stanza. I can feel your frustration here... Well done. Hope you're fine though :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ooooooft, someone's angry! >:( Well done with it all, E - loved it.

~ Noodle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"let the fire and blood rain
upon your pathetic little Heaven"

Woah.... This is really straight at the reader.. I take it you were perhaps caught up in one of these snares.. This is an extremely powerful piece... I hope she reads it...
I have known several that have been hurt by liars and fakes pretending to be someone they are not.. false pictures, phonies with an agenda the worst kind.... Your words are strong your message even stronger. " Is your greatest ambition to f**k yourself?" Great angry rant..

Thank you for the read request..
shallimarRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow that's some angry emotions! Great poem though:)!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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