dreams

shoegaze poetry

i will never be so lucky
no angel like you will wander
into my little nightmare land ever again
but you're already passing
i'm a little blur
as your eyes look for more elegance

where my dreams go to die
i am sure that's where you reside
i want to be there with you
as the moon sets into the lake
framing me in blue
you shone white as you lit up my soul

i wish i could bathe in the springs
in the wonderland i see
whenever i think of you

but i'll never see you again
you're long gone and
you never even knew
how much i cared
you're the angel that passed me by
a faint happiness i'll never feel again

Reviews

[eglantine]

tender and forlorn

[Infinity Blues]

Lucrecia took the words right out of my mouth....or fingertips?
Anyways, another masterpiece Elliott. I enjoyed as always.
-Infinity

[Lexi Villanueva]

Wow this is good and sad I like the second stanza!-100

[s y e]

Woo, someone's on a role! Ha, awesome write, E! I loved it.

~ Noodle.

[chaotic katie]

Another flawless write! Fantastic job Elliot!

[Simon Welsh]

Thanks hon :)

[chaotic katie]

Anytime!