a nightmare's kiss

shoegaze-y

show me affection this wondrous night
blow me a kiss as i melt into the blue
white lights blink at me
in the silky-softness of your hair
where i feel almost safe... almost in love

a nightmare's kiss to heal my wounds
ruby red lips upon my wrist
silver clouds break away
on a kingdom of vapour trails
cradle me in your serenity and gentle words

show me affection this wondrous evening
skipping on the waves of a fragrant breeze
brushing me lightly with a petal touch
i wish you was here now
because i don't want to wake up alone

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

lovely imagery and beautiful piece fantastic job

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

The colors...so many colors...I love it!

ruby red lips upon my wrist
silver clouds break away
on a kingdom of vapour trails -- great lines!

Not much to say here that hasn't already been said. Well done.

[Graveyardfuck]

ruby red lips upon my wrist
Favorite line.
Great poem.

[William C Jones III]

Another poem that's better than good!