All Glittered Out In Love

Take a sip and hold me

“Attention here we are”

Brightly lit and wild

All glittered out in love.

Past, let’s leave it there

Running rampant into notoriety

Louder than an atomic bomb,

Shattering the glass of destiny.

You are delicious and I am starving

Bouncing back and forth off of reality

Stark raving mad and never catching our fill.

Twinkling star shine eyes

Staring at one another forever.

Reviews

[bob, small b. aka invs]

You are delicious and I am starving

Bouncing back and forth off of reality

Stark raving mad and never catching our fill.

... i absolutely loved these lines. brilliant stuff.

[EMF]

Harsh and punding one second, soft and gentle the next, you flow is perfect. A faultless poem of the intensity of love. And lust. Wonderful and all comsuming. A great natural espresso of a poem. Oh, I shiver, and it's not with the cold