Far from perfect.

Far from perfect.

A Poem by Sarah McKeever Hitt

How far from perfect

the glimpse

the nod

the exit.

 

Ours is a story

retold

rebuilt

removed from the public.

 

And you are gone.

As am I.

How far from perfect

we have become.

© 2008 Sarah McKeever Hitt


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I found this to be a very powerful piece.

I agree with Invs, "how far from perfect we have become" is a poem by itself.

Nicely done. :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

Posted 16 Years Ago


"how far from perfect we have become"

that's a poem in itself. very nice writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Sarah McKeever Hitt
Sarah McKeever Hitt

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