dangerous

A shudder penetrates the day
making people aware
that the rapture of man
is coming to an end.
Or maybe it's just us.
We have a power
and a way about us
most find trivial,
but we are dangerous together.
Rocking the balances
tricking the masses into
finding peace within our madness.
Together we are beautiful
scary
and most of alive in each other.

Reviews

[C.T. Bailey]

A very good write. I'm not sure how to follow the your usage of rapture, however, I like the point made. I especially enjoy the closure given the "masses" in the end. My fav usage in this -- "beautiful scary"...Im gonna remember that one.
Todd

[Teenage poet]

Very well written and I love the word choice you choose in the passage.