Upright.

It fits so perfectly,

below my self loathing principles.

Above my self righteousness

lies the space dedicated to you,

No more obviously empty

Than the look on my face

the night we met.

Reviews

[PianoandPage]

you have a nice balanced form.

i had to read this poem a few times to really get what it was saying... and that's not a bad thing.

you write with immediate depth and the lack of flowery bits kept this real, and honest.

thank you.