The Memory...

Was free thinking writing while I was talking to this guy I am totally in love with and just about at my wits end because I can't get him to date only me exclusively. Of course I am dating others as well so as not to be the idiot in the relationship. but

 

lightly the breeze dances on my lips,

like a passionate lover's kiss.

Almost from afar

as I could dare to miss,

And in the distance,

I can hear

in the echoes of the waves crashing on the shores,

softly does my name get called.

And I remember.

as if I could forget.

In the darkness I can see,

a shapely form that beckons me,

and for a second I can tell,

it's someone familiar to me,

a person once SO familiar to me,

like a close friend ingrained in my mind.

I taste the favorite wine we used to drink,

and flooding to me comes memories,

of another life we used to lead,

and sadness overwhelms me,

because you left so unceremoniiously,

the day...you walked off that beach.

and became a lover,

of that sea.

Author's Note

This is just my subconscious expressing it's fear of rejection. I am guessing. I wrote this as I talked to my secret love, I wasn't even really paying attention to it til the last line. And I was shocked. I was looking for a way to get back into my writing and was just free thinking and this came out! Swear!

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very dizzying and passionate write. I enjoyed.....

[Greg Skura]

Very vivid imagery with desire filled emotion running through this piece! Thank you for sharing! i hope one day to write as fast as i think that would be fantastic! always lose my train of thought and have to re-sense the impression and than turn into expression.