Let's

Let's walk, Let's talk, Let's hold hands

Let's move with intention and freedom because our hearts can dance...

Together, to a mellow..or fast-paced tune

Lust is of conditioning, and not in the plans

Let's pop this can of unconditional frequency and drink,

Drink...Drink until we're in a sea of unforgettable fortune

Let's balance the natural and show our peers and surrounders that this really exists...

Emit an aura that will brighten a room filled with tombs, A room filled dooms, 

Let's paint irridescent and incandescent and flourescent, 

Of course the brushes are our essence...

Mind, body, and soul, the plugs let's connect them,

Let's..Let's...

Mess around with time and make it impossible to rewind because our memories are great but our future is divine,

Let's give each other mountains to climb, 

Let's give each other pillows or shoulders to whine,

And give each other spritual wine in the presence of hard times

But liquid can work just fine

Let's kill the disease of doubt in any amount

Let's make checks bounce

Let's keep happiness around

Bound by your spell you are the sweetest taste, 

A ballerina full of grace

Patience is a virute

And im glad to have you

Glued to the smile, the person, the wrongs, the rights, 

the laughs, the frights, weakness, the might, 

our days, our nights, our sorrows, ourdelights,

In the glimmer of righteousness I am your knight, 

So in the sights of treachory i will fight..

For your right to comfortability

For you to stay with me

To read your pages in entirety

And drink your love but always filling your cup, never leaving it empty...

Sometimes the flaws cut deep and seems like our

hearts cant beat and the hills are too far

to travel and too steep to climb

but we were build for this, in the midst,

we are unstoppable, like the power within

the warriors of battle couldn't compare

the way we show our hearts golds value couldn't compare

So Let's...

Continue to be right, be real, 

be passionate, be knowledgable kids in this

Playground of Life, Love, and

Let's stay best friends  all til the end.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Great rhythm, flow, and intermittent rhymes throughout highlight this monumental Free Verse epic to positive life and love, almost a poetic manual … very much enjoyed.
Break the extra long line into segments for a nicer, more appealing presentation and to carry forth the thoughts and feelings in a easier manner to follow.

Welcome to the site, and my most grateful thanks for sharing your skills, My New Friend! ⁓ Richard


(psst! correct Psych[e]delic Love, and a few other misspellings throughout and it will be a virtual masterpiece) Blessings! ~ RJ

[Psychadelic Love]

Thanks fr the wisdom i will be doing some adjustments.Glad you enjoyed the masterpiece tro be. :) Psychadelic is that way for a personal touch.

Thanks for the warm welcome. I appreciate that much.

[B. Boileau]

Excellent is the first thing that comes to mind. The kind of stuff I enjoy reading over and over. Great ending ! Thanks for sharing
bill

[Psychadelic Love]

Thank you for the kind words and thanks for reading. Tell your friends hahaha. These comments bring joy

[Lyingwithlions]

AWESOME piece! great play on words. Enjoyed this very much. You're a great writer and poet with no doubt. looking forward to reading more when time allows.

[Psychadelic Love]

Thank you. I really appreciate that you appreciate this piece. Plus more for the compliments on it. This was the firstborn. Much abliged!

[several thousand]

I really, really love this poem. The love is so gentle and kind. I think I fell in love at about this line "Lust is of conditioning, and not in the plans" and I didn't want the poem to end.
Beautiful.

[Psychadelic Love]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you could appreciate the poem.

[Sultrysoul]

I really like this it is very emotion gripping and I enjoy your choice of words

[Psychadelic Love]

thank you friend. much appreciated.

[Sultrysoul]

You are very welcome my friend

[Psychadelic Love]

This is a part of my album :)

[Sultrysoul]

Great let me know when it's out

[Psychadelic Love]

Lol sho' you right!

[Sultrysoul]

......... :D